" A Necessary Portal " ~ A Messianic Jewish Novel by A.R. Koheen

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2012

         Twenty-one year old Sharayah Dubois was adopted at nine-years of age by Rick and Marge Wyatt late in their lives when they finally came to grips with the death of their only child Dick as a teenager. To celebrate her milestone birthday, they have invited her to share the first three weeks of their six-week ‘Second Honeymoon’. Shortly after her return Stateside, to stay with Marge's elderly father, so as not to miss the first week of classes, a jihadist attack by young militants on the isolated Dubai Island used by Westerners and their supporters becomes a horrific reality for the quiet twenty-one-year old college sophomore and her family.
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       While eluding capture with her husband Rick, Marge Wyatt accidentally drops their only connection: a cell phone, in a seldom-used hallway.  It's brought to the older leader of the teen Jihadists who uses it to convince her father Drew Slocomb they already hold the couple hostage and that his total surrender to them is the only condition for the safe release of his beloved daughter and of his son-in-law. He flies publicly to the Island, while Sharayah follows secretively; accompanying an Israeli agent assigned to sneak in and release them privately, without the outside world being any the wiser. Sharayah is shocked to discover that her mild-mannered grandfather is nothing like the man she always assumed, but then, neither are her parents! Even the volcanic bedrock below the  hotel holds its share of secrets!

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     But when the bloody siege extends to a third day no one outside the building suspects the delay is unintentional! The original goal to attract sufficient foreign journalists to witness the death of Andrew Wyatt and then inflict the maximum amount of terror that a mere seven member terrorist cell could hope to accomplish, by exploding a ‘dirty’ bomb to destroy the island, casting up as much radioactive debris around the world in the atmosphere as possible with a limited amount of plutonium, is delayed by the accidental discovery of a secret cache of guns, ammunition, missiles, grenades and rocket launchers hidden in caves carved under the hotel that is secretly owned by the Wyatt family! The attackers must hastily gather a flotilla of local boats to remove and hide the vast army-sized store of guns and ammunition without drawing the attention of the reporters they have lured to the tropical paradise, who are now bored with the endless stalemate. 

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           During the course of the story, the Reader is drawn deeper and deeper into the internal realities of the conflict until no one is left to stop the final connection and detonation of the Jihadist’s determined march toward martyrdom but Shaw and her wounded father Rick!

 

Saturday, November 12th, 2011  7:15 pm   PST

Shalom Dear Ones,

        I was at my favorite Safeway Store in the Valley, picking up the last of what I need for Thanksgiving Dinner where I met a lovely young woman at the Starbuck's Coffee kiosk and she graciously gave me permission to use her first name, Sharayah, named by her Mom from a Nineteen Eighty's song by Christian singer Amy Grant, and that has given an entire new outlook to "A Necessary Portal", breathing a vitality into it that I hadn't seen possible by simply making the protagonist slightly older, and therefore more resourceful in the face of a crisis. It also opens an entire new avenue of action and needing to be dependent on the LORD. I mean, a wealth of ideas struck me as soon as I got up....the snow has finally arrived, so that also helps with the aches and pains.  

       So many of Thee are staying in touch that now that I have an active book I think I will stay on line through till Christmas and Hanukkah.

       The LORD 'promised' in my deepest prayer time that "2012 will be the year that changes everything" and as I've struggling to get back to this summer's precious, precious time I've also been looking forward - Twenty Twelve is just weeks away, so why wait until the stroke of Midnight on December Thirty first to start prayerfully waiting for the change to begin? Right?  These last three weeks have been a struggle but that only means you're working toward something. Grandmother used to say that Satan has limited resources and he only uses them against people who are blocking him, so even though I didn't guess yet this book was rising to the surface, it suggests that I'm certainly headed in the right direction! The application will be received on Monday, but they have a two-year waiting list....sigh...but I have lots to do to fill the time before I have to worry about moving to a new house.

       So, I've had my shot and I'm about to eat, then I'm going to work on the new Messianic Jewish Faith-and-Action story. In the meantime, if thee stop by, please take my wishes for the loveliest weeks ahead for thee, whether you celebrate a national days of Thanksgiving or not [made formal by President Abraham Lincoln in 1863....] and may the dreams of your heart always rise to the surface when you least expect it!!!

      Respectfully, your older sister in the risen Lord,

        Asia 



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Tuesday, December 6th, 2011

     When I realized I wanted to bring in the grown daughter of a new character who's adding so much to the story and it's new theme of the reason BEHIND the attack, I went back to ask Jen, my favorite Salesperson at the Valley Safeway STARBUCKS, if she would mind if I used her name? For years she's been patiently listening to me talk about my website, and I was really embarrassed that I hadn't thought to ask her! Luckily, she was quick to say yes and not hold a grudge. This will allow me to explore a whole new area for the protagonist as I discovered I could explain the unwittingly delay by making use of it with a 'secret' I can't wait to explore!!

    Asia

Though inspired by recent events, this story is fictional. Any resemblance to persons living or dead is purely coincidental.



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